If you think about the
last time you told a story to friends or family, you may - for humorous or
dramatic purposes - have skipped a few unimportant details or even exaggerated.
Why? Because you wanted to keep the interest of your audience.
If you picked up a book
and read that John was fine when he woke up, had a fine day at work,
a fine time out with his friends in the evening, went home and had a great night’s
sleep - although this might be all well and good for John - one
more paragraph of the same and you wouldn’t read another word. ‘John woke up in
an unfamiliar apartment with a splitting headache and no memory of how he got there...’
gives a writer some opportunities for drama.
Without drama you
cannot hold a reader. It doesn’t always have to be a bullet to the head crisis, it
can be a will they, won’t they question (think Pride and Prejudice) - but you need dramatic action and conflict in
your story.
Psychologists say fiction enables us to identify with a character and share their experiences, no matter how spine-tingling or
horrendous they may be. The attraction of living through conflict without any harm enables us to enrich our lives, and maybe learn something along the way.
However,
placing your
character in the middle of the battlefield where he’s likely to be
dodging
bullets isn’t enough - he has to undergo an internal conflict as well.
Maybe his sense of loyalty and duty is put to the test by his discovery of a shocking secret about his senior officer? The journey your
character
makes isn’t just external (making it off the battlefield), he must also resolve his inner dilemma. Ultimately, he arrives both alive,
safe and a better man.
I’m making steady progress with my additions to strand A, and almost finished editing strand B. On the one hand, yeah, but on the other, I wonder if I must work harder. How many hours a day do I spend writing? How many
hours on social media? I was thinking of keeping a record for a few days because
I’ve had a couple of episodes of socme, (pronounced with a hard c as in sokme
and stands for social media) overload and I need to keep a two thirds
writing and one third blog, twitter etc. balance.
So far I'm writing two blogs a week – Friday and Monday (approx.) – and I hope you enjoy
reading my posts as much as I enjoy writing them.
Today’s Haiku
MORNING
the space where you
slept
lies empty, cold –
indented
with your heaviness
My book Gold
Dragon Haiku is now available as an ebook at the Amazon Kindle Store.
http://www.amazon.co.uk/GOLD-DRAGON-HAIKU-ebook/dp/B00CLJ0RGK/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1367505326&sr=1-1
Here’s the link:
http://www.amazon.co.uk/GOLD-DRAGON-HAIKU-ebook/dp/B00CLJ0RGK/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1367505326&sr=1-1
For those of you who
are interested in improving your Flash Fiction, Holly Lisle has a free course. Check it out:
To all story lovers out
there, good reading, and to those who write, good writing.
Teagan. Blog news alert. Fridays and Mondays are the worst days to get people to read a blog beside Sunday. Tuesday through Thursday finds the most people sitting in their cubicles wondering what to look at next. Of course...all of this from a man who just posted a new blog today (friday). :)
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